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Haiku-16

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A trunk lies split;
Age, or force, or frost,
The gaps endure.


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Few birds chirp,
Anchored by winter,
Ascending ice.
And as November comes to a close, a few more haiku. It has been a productive month for writing.
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squibblyquill's avatar
I like the first one. It seems to say more, suggest more possible ways of relating to it than the second. - sorry already said this...just relooking I guess